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| - | ====== Chapter | + | ====== Chapter 8: Geb; The Ruins and Sacred Beasts ====== |
| - | Will woke up feeling very refreshed, almost as if the day before there had been no ' | + | Will woke up feeling very refreshed, almost as if the day before there had been no ' |
| - | Taking off his covers he noticed a slight chill and quickly changed into his clothes. He'd need a new outfit; the jeans he'd worn from Earth were in need of a good cleaning. It would also be nice to see what other options he'd have for clothes on Ged. | + | Taking off his covers he noticed a slight chill and quickly changed into his clothes. He'd need a new outfit; the jeans he'd worn from Earth were in need of a good cleaning. It would also be nice to see what other options he'd have for clothes on Geb. |
| Walking down the stairs into the main eating hall, he saw that Kadde was sitting enjoying a few nuts and a hot drink. Kadde was glad to see Will up so early, there was still so much to discuss. | Walking down the stairs into the main eating hall, he saw that Kadde was sitting enjoying a few nuts and a hot drink. Kadde was glad to see Will up so early, there was still so much to discuss. | ||
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| "So where are you headed? What is your team looking for?" Will asked as he finally had some of the tea. It was a bit hot, but not bad. Will had never had much taste for tea, it all seemed to taste the same to him. | "So where are you headed? What is your team looking for?" Will asked as he finally had some of the tea. It was a bit hot, but not bad. Will had never had much taste for tea, it all seemed to taste the same to him. | ||
| - | "I found some new information a while back, and it's been a dream of mine to learn more about Ged's 'World Clock' | + | "I found some new information a while back, and it's been a dream of mine to learn more about Geb's 'World Clock' |
| - | "What is the 'World Clock'?" | + | "What is the 'World Clock'?" |
| After a little while Miila and Julia came down stairs and joined Kadde and Will. "I take it ' | After a little while Miila and Julia came down stairs and joined Kadde and Will. "I take it ' | ||
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| "Hey Will, feeling better?" | "Hey Will, feeling better?" | ||
| - | "Still getting used to the whole ' | + | "Still getting used to the whole ' |
| After a nice conversive breakfast the group finally got down to the day's business. " | After a nice conversive breakfast the group finally got down to the day's business. " | ||
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| Now that she'd heard Miila open up about her thoughts, Julia was kind of lost. All her adult life had been one single goal after another; graduate high school with honors, get into a good college, work on a medical career and diploma, find a great job and nice boyfriend... it was all nice, but the last week or so she'd started to question that plan. "I guess, I'm not totally sure anymore. I wanted to get my degree from school and find a good job. But, after meeting Will, there was part of me that didn't know. Maybe, there' | Now that she'd heard Miila open up about her thoughts, Julia was kind of lost. All her adult life had been one single goal after another; graduate high school with honors, get into a good college, work on a medical career and diploma, find a great job and nice boyfriend... it was all nice, but the last week or so she'd started to question that plan. "I guess, I'm not totally sure anymore. I wanted to get my degree from school and find a good job. But, after meeting Will, there was part of me that didn't know. Maybe, there' | ||
| + | "...or you see something about Will that you want to see in yourself?" | ||
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| + | While Julia and Miila were out getting some supplies and Julia' | ||
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| + | "This should be far enough away. Don't want any bystanders to get hurt." Kadde said as he took a step back from Will. "Well, show me what you can do." | ||
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| + | Will took a long deep breath and reached into his arcane reserve. | ||
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| + | He held out his hand and initiated his lighting spell. A quick snap of energy crackled from his hand and a bluish orb of light manifested like before. It hovered an inch or two above Will's hand for several seconds before he allowed it to burn-out. | ||
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| + | "Hmm, basic but practical. How long can you maintain the orb?" Kadde asked. | ||
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| + | "Any other spells or incantations?" | ||
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| + | "I can use a deflection spell." | ||
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| + | Will took a deep breath to recover a bit. " | ||
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| + | "Have you ever considered scaling it down, maybe just enough to cover an area the size of a soldier' | ||
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| + | "On Myrah we were only ever taught standard spells. They served military purpose, but there hasn't been a major riot for many years. Mostly it's outdated rhetorical spells." | ||
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| + | "But could you make it smaller?" | ||
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| + | Will took a moment to think over the mechanics of his shield spell. At the academy, his instructors had always emphasized the size to be big enough to protect other people from injury, but the efficiency of spells was left to advanced combatives; reserved only for Myrah' | ||
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| + | "Since Geb can be a dangerous place at times, versatility is highly valued. How about this; project your shield again, but only use one hand. A smaller projection point." | ||
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| + | The shield spell activated, though this time it felt a bit lighter. The strain was half of what it used to be, and Kadde threw a small stone at the shield. The stone connected with the repulsing energies and outlined an area about the size of Will. The decrease in output also made it easier for him to hold the shield in place. | ||
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| + | On Myrah use of magic was usually reserved only for classes and exercises. Use outside the academy brought too much attention. Actually, the only group known to use arcana completely unrestricted were terrorists or insurrectionists. Will had heard distant rumors of magi turning against the civic " | ||
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| + | There were people, usually like Will, born into the lowest tiers of the magi-society who fought against the rigid system set up by the 1st and 2nd class magi. In the distant reaches of Myrah' | ||
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| + | Before Will had left on his adventure, he'd started to wonder why hadn't the secret police simply clamped down on all 3rd class magi citizens? Until now it hadn't occurred to him that maybe there were too many 3rd classers to be completely watched or controlled. Myrah had a population reaching almost a billion people. Probably only about 5 percent were actually first or second class magi-citizens. With over half of all people being non-magic, that meant the other 40-ish percent were probably like Will, third class magi. Powerful enough to be useful, but maybe too numerous to be left uncontrolled. | ||
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| + | "Beg your pardon, Will..." | ||
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| + | Will thought for a moment, there was at least one particular spell he had that he had been working on, but the occasion had never popped-up for its use. " | ||
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| + | Will stepped up and made sure the road was clear for a decent distance. He'd practiced all the mathematics for this one, all the theoretical parts, but this time he could finally put it to the test. He pulled in the required energies and rose both hands up to the sky. The energies followed and he remembered the next step was to create a crackling orb of miniature ' | ||
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| + | He'd experimented with his light orb for years in secret. It was a simple practical spell, but it also had an unusually nasty side-effect; | ||
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| + | The balls hit the ground and exploded loudly as they touched rocks, stones and bits of grass. Dust and debris flew in all directions under the force of the miniature blasts. When the dust had died down Kadde and Will inspected the blast site carefully. There were tiny craters where the orbs had made contact and either blasted the rocks to pieces or burned grass to blackened spots. | ||
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| + | Kadde was still a bit shocked by the force of the numerous crackling explosions. "Wow! Serious firepower my friend. That should be useful if we need to level the numbers game." After a few more minutes of inspecting the damage, Kadde had an idea for Will to try out. | ||
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| + | "Will, can you split-off individual orbs one-at-a-time, | ||
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| + | "I don't know, Kadde. Each orb is very sensitive to impact. I'd have to have a smaller number. The reason I use a large spread is to make sure I can hit my target. It's tricky controlling individuals." | ||
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| + | In the distance the sun was starting to dip bit-by-bit as the afternoon began to pass. They both took their seats on a few large rocks and discussed the various techniques Will could use for increasing his arcane arsenal. Originally Will had thought his selections of spells was quite nice as it was, but after listening to Kadde he knew that there was so much more. | ||
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| + | "On Geb alone, there are at least 200 different known spells for elemental magics alone. Not to mention various non-elemental types of energy bending, magics used by creatures, or even the sacred beasts. That's the wonderful thing about being a scholar; you never stop learning about all of the surprises life has in store." | ||
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| + | After a while of discussing arcana and its nature on Geb, Kadde had convinced Will to try his attack order again. " | ||
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| + | Will did as Kadde had suggested and allowed the energies to flow through only two fingers on his right hand. Only 5 small orbs could be seen. Will selected a single target, a rough rocky lump, and directed his spell at the lump of rock. | ||
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| + | The result was a gnarled crackling and hissing of explosions. Bits of rock and ground were flung in every which way. The lump was reduced to a decent sized hole by the road. | ||
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| + | "I think we're making progress, Will." Kadde said as he patted Will on the back. They inspected the small crater carefully, it was several inches deep, with bits strewn all around. Will was a bit divided, he was glad to be able to learn more about arcana, but not if it made him this worn out. | ||
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| + | "Well, that's enough today. There' | ||
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| + | They began to head back to the village together. Will was feeling tired from the day's practice. It felt like lunch had been so long ago. He wondered how Julia' | ||
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| + | The late afternoon sun had begun to reach the tree-line by the time Will and Kadde returned to the inn. Outside Julia and Miila were waiting, with Julia in her new travel outfit. | ||
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| + | "Well boys, what do you think?" | ||
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| + | Julia felt a bit awkward in her new clothes; they seemed a bit stiff and heavy. Miila had told her it took a while to ' | ||
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| + | They began to head back to the village together. Will was feeling tired from the day's practice. It felt like lunch had been so long ago. He wondered how Julia' | ||
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| + | The late afternoon sun had begun to reach the tree-line by the time Will and Kadde returned to the inn. Outside Julia and Miila were waiting, with Julia in her new travel outfit. | ||
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| + | "Well boys, what do you think?" | ||
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| + | Julia felt a bit awkward in her new clothes; they seemed a bit stiff and heavy. Miila had told her it took a while to ' | ||
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| + | She felt it was all a bit too much, but Miila had told her that travel gear wasn't meant for fashion, it was meant for the road. Days, weeks, maybe months of wear and tear. One had to be prepared. | ||
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| + | Will thought she looked nice. The clothes from Earth were just not his ' | ||
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| + | "What will I do with my ' | ||
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| + | They all headed into the inn for dinner. Jack was already waiting for them at a decent sized corner table. "Well, well. Looks like everyone had a productive day". | ||
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| + | Jack was enjoying a tray of bread and cheese as he waited. He was ready to give them his daily report of the area. | ||
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| + | They sat down to their meal as Kadde and Jack went over the details of the next leg of their trip. "The road will be another week before we get to where we want to go." Jack explained. "It goes on for at least 5 days to the East, then turns North east." He said while showing a rough map of the local area to Kadde. | ||
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| + | "I thought we could just go straight East to the ruins?" | ||
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| + | "I heard the hills are not the best route." | ||
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| + | At that, everyone stopped and thought about the implication. Will and Julia were a bit confused still. Kadde simply sighed and accepted the recent turn in fate. | ||
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| + | "Guess maps can't predict that, now can they?" | ||
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| + | "Not yet." Jack replied. | ||
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| + | They all ate a slightly more subdued meal that night. | ||
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| + | The sleeping arrangements hadn't changed, and Will was ready to ask Jack about the expedition. Kadde always seemed to have ways to evade his questions, or carry on with lengthy explanations. Jack was sitting awake in his bed as Will had finished changing into his sleeping clothes. Jack's skin color had shifted to make him appear almost the same texture as the backboard of the bed. | ||
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| + | "Guess that's natural." | ||
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| + | "No, Kadde said he'd tell me tomorrow." | ||
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| + | "I guess you could call it that. We look for ruins and information concerning the ruins. If there' | ||
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| + | Will tried to wrap his head around the different facets of Geb. It was likely a world older than his own, or at least it seemed like it. Myrah had some ruins, but the ruling elites had done so much to erase any relics that might have told a different story than the one they wanted to tell. ' | ||
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| + | "Jack, how is it you can change color? Is it magic or something?" | ||
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| + | "A mutant?" | ||
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| + | "Yeah. We naturally can change our skin color to whatever shade or texture we need. Very useful for stealth work." | ||
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| + | "What about the other races of Geb, what can they do?" | ||
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| + | "Well, the Animal traits are usually obvious. Flight, senses, healing factors. But, there are a few races I'm not too sure about. Sprites and Dark elves are generally very secretive about their gifts. Some races actively avoid contact with eachother." | ||
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| + | "I... want... to... understand. Myrah, Mist, Earth, Geb.... I don't understand yet." | ||
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| + | That night Will could swear he felt a cold presence in his room as he slept. Eyes from the shadows, scurryings in the walls. The smaller ones didn't bother him, but tonight some thing was there. It was the same aura that had tried to push Will away from Geb before. | ||
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| + | The feeling lasted mere moments, but Will could have sworn it had been there half-the night. Finally after getting back to sleep he heard its voice. It had to be its voice, he was asleep! | ||
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| + | "Much weighs upon your mind, child. Too much, alas. Geb has too many secrets for you to find peace, Will. You have much to learn, and so little time. Rest for now...." | ||
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| + | The voice sounded deep and old. It was like a chilly winter breeze, with clasping hooked fingers. Will tried to resist, but soon he drifted into a dreamless sleep. | ||
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| + | Will woke to Julia' | ||
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| + | Kadde and Vulgurutt were absent, but Jack and Miila were both chattering in the door-way. | ||
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| + | "You were totally out of it this morning. No pulse, no breathing, its like you were dead." Julia said in a stressed voice. | ||
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| + | "I had a really strange night. Something was here. I don't know what it was, but it was.... can't think of the words. Great, ancient...." | ||
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| + | Will explained his dream and feelings to Julia as Jack and Miila listened from the hall. Jack left to find Kadde as Miila stayed to keep guard. | ||
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| + | Will and Julia went down for breakfast, after Will had changed into his clothes for the day. Kadde, and Jack were waiting at the table nearest the stairs. both had serious looks on their faces. Jack was slowly eating bread and cheese while Kadde sat in the center chair of the table. | ||
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| + | "It felt like a ' | ||
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| + | "Guess that complicates things a bit now." Kadde said with a heavy sigh. | ||
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| + | Will and Julia sat down, just then Kadde leaned in close and asked for Will's attention. " | ||
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| + | Everyone was out of the inn almost before finishing their breakfasts. Kadde led the group to a forest clearing a good way from the village. Miila kept constant watch as Jack was sent into town for a few errands. | ||
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| + | "Is that what came last night?" | ||
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| + | "Seems to be the case." Kadde answered. | ||
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| + | "What is a ' | ||
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| + | "Guess I should clarify a bit," Kadde took a deep breath before beginning. "The term monster usually refers to 8 specific creatures that inhabit Geb. They are very unique and much of our world' | ||
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| + | It is said that when a person dies on Geb, their soul will be reborn into a monster. It is a cycle of birth - death - and re-birth. A second chance to help keep the balance of Geb." | ||
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| + | "Why would your soul return as a monster?" | ||
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| + | "It was said, there is a King of the monsters. There isn't much besides some old references, but it states he is their lord and ruler.... | ||
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| + | "When life began on Geb, eons ago. The first man created the first spell of Arcanic arts. Giving rise to a multitude of millenia of mystic forces. When he died, he was reborn as the first monster." | ||
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| + | "Snark it you must, but it is a possible explanation," | ||
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| + | "Why would your soul return as a monster?" | ||
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| + | It was said, there is a King of the monsters. There isn't much besides some old references, but it states he is their lord and ruler... | ||
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| + | When life began on Geb, eons ago. The first man created the first spell of Arcanic arts. Giving rise to a multitude of millenia of mystic forces. When he died, he was reborn as the first monster." | ||
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| + | "As the name implies; very large things with immense power." | ||
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| + | "What about ' | ||
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| + | "Well, they seem to need us as much as we need them. Shade for the creepers and they watch out for potential threats. | ||
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| + | "But, Last night I felt a terrifying aura. Was that a monster, too?" Will interjected. | ||
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| + | With a great sigh Kadde finally came to the point he'd hoped to avoid. | ||
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| + | "There is one, one that I don't like even going into details about... A Nightmare." | ||
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| + | "Very little exists that even mentions them, they are rare and terribly mysterious. No one is even sure what they look like. Something about a protective ' | ||
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| + | Add to the fact that they actively avoid any human type species, they are simply incomprehendable." | ||
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| + | It had occurred to all of them that as Kadde ended his explanation, | ||
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| + | "It spoke." | ||
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| + | "I can't shake the feeling that all of this is happening for a reason." | ||
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| + | The trees and grasses wavered in the light mid-day breeze. " | ||
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| + | Julia was starting to see how this was all troubling Will greatly. From her conversations with Will over the past weeks she'd learned much about Myrah. | ||
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| + | How a select elite controlled the majority of an entire world and its civilization. Used their gifts to benefit only themselves and maintain an iron-grip on the world' | ||
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| + | "Those thoughts aside, we will be ready to leave in one-more day. Vulgurutt is starting to wake again and will want to be on the move." Kadde announced. | ||
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| + | "Miila my dear, would you be so kind as to help our new travel companions prepare?" | ||
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| + | She then pulled a wooden sword out from her travel pack and handed it to Julia. "I hope you don't mind. Everyone has to have some training." | ||
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| + | //Continue to [[Chapter 9]]...// | ||
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| + | * Tweak: When Will is visited by the Nightmare and feels the freezing cold aura, have Julia wake up shivering in her room, or have her experience a fragmented, confusing dream that mirrors what the Nightmare is telling Will. | ||
| + | * Tweak: When Julia is feeling anxious about her lost Earth future at the tailor, have Will inexplicably feel a sudden pang of homesickness or existential dread, even though he hates Myrah. | ||
| + | * Tweak: Make the toll of Will's magic more apparent, and hint that Julia' | ||
| + | * Tweak: During the training, show that individually, | ||
| + | * Tweak: Have Julia express a thought to Miila about feeling " | ||