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| - | ====A Single Stone...==== | + | ====Chapter 2: A Single Stone...==== |
| - | Will's magical senses had always felt like a stagnant pool of water, but touching this stone gave him the suddenly, overwhelming sense of a flow - like there was suddenly more to explore - something to touch and discover. He had studied and worked to improve his prowess over these years, but he'd never felt a real //pull// in his arcane senses. In this world of grey monotony, the stone drew him away. It pulled in the way a cool fall breeze asks you to walk out into it and just... let... go... | + | Will's magical senses had always felt like he was swimming in a stagnant pool of water, but touching this stone gave him the suddenly, overwhelming sense of a flow - like there was suddenly more to explore - something to touch and discover. He had studied and worked to improve his prowess over these years, but he'd never felt a real //pull// in his arcane senses. In this world of grey monotony, the stone drew him away. It pulled in the way a cool fall breeze asks you to walk out into it and just... let... go... |
| And for once, Will felt as if he could go. A thought opened in his mind about leaving all this dull grey behind. | And for once, Will felt as if he could go. A thought opened in his mind about leaving all this dull grey behind. | ||