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-====The Grey World==== +====Chapter 1: The Grey World==== 
-From above, the world of [[Myra]] looked much like any other world.  Rivers, mountains, forests, and, of course, cities.  Cities that covered roughly half of the arable land of Myra.+{{  story:grey_world.png?600}} 
 +From above, the world of [[Myrah]] looked much like any other world.  Rivers, mountains, forests, and, of course, cities.  Cities that covered roughly half of the arable land of Myra.
  
 It hadn't always been like this - as [[Will]] called it, "a grey world" Long before it had been a world that was wild and free of this gloom.  It was in those days still a very young world. It hadn't always been like this - as [[Will]] called it, "a grey world" Long before it had been a world that was wild and free of this gloom.  It was in those days still a very young world.
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 It was during his lunch that he chanced a quick walk around the ground.  The ground felt good under his feet after the past several hours of standing and sitting on solid stone floors. It was during his lunch that he chanced a quick walk around the ground.  The ground felt good under his feet after the past several hours of standing and sitting on solid stone floors.
  
-He might have missed it completely if there hadn't been just the slightest shift in the wind and sunlight that day.  It was no bigger than his thumb; smooth and round in a way that there was a small scoop missing in the bottom center with specks of jet black speckled over the mostly turquoise surface.+He might have missed it completely if there hadn't been just the slightest shift in the wind and sunlight that day.  It was no bigger than his thumb; [[gemstone|smooth and round in a way that there was a small scoop]] missing in the bottom center with specks of jet black speckled over the mostly turquoise surface.
  
 The moment Will touched it; that was when everything changed forever... The moment Will touched it; that was when everything changed forever...